Welcome!! As part of the fabulous blogfest, here is the first line of my YA Fantasy Adventure called WISE JIM AND THE EXPATRIATES. I think first lines all by themselves are a hard thing to gauge. I look forward to your feedback in the comments and look forward to reading yours! I’ve visited about 100 blogs so far and there are some awesome first lines out there! I think I will continue to check in on the newer arrivals even though the contest is almost over. I have really enjoyed my feeback, so useful and welcome.
The waitress’ thought hissed through my mind.